The weather of ShiJiaZhuang

Now I am leaving living in ShiJiaZhuang.It is a very hot city.The highest temperture maybe 37 degrees. So I stay in the my room all every days. When i was a child, I'd like to go out to playing. But now the big sun scares me.The ultraviolet is bad for my skin. Maybe I can go outside at night. When I went home today, I saw clouds in the sky and I guess it is going to rain.It is so exciting ,because the weather will be nice and cool again.

The weather of ShiJiaZhuang

Now I am leaving in ShiJiaZhuang.It is a very hot city.The highest temperature  maybe 37 degrees. So I stay in the room all days.When  was a child,  I'd like to go out playing.But now the big sun scares me.The ultraviolet is bad for my skin.Maybe I can go outside at night.When I went home today,I saw clouds in the sky.I guess it is going to rain.It is so exciting ,because the weather will be nice.

 Hi Danna:  
Consider this.  "Leaving"   means "going away".  I think you want the phrase,  "living in"

  Capitalize  "I" when you refer to yourself.

 Nice, brief essay.  Keep writing about the things of interest to you.--Bruce