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Basketball Every Thursday Having bath just now, I am relaxing myself in the solf sofa, listening Nivana's " come as you are". Right , that 's it especially after played basketball in the evening.I always feel lucky for rutine basketball game in every thursday evening since only int the students' age I often spent my time there and didn't expect there would be days when I got a job playing with colleagues, so it must be lucky really and gift from this work. Tks, God. What impress me indeed is it wakes me youth and energy still there inside, really cool, haha...Hope you like sports also, which keep you youth forever just like vampaire. Haha...

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Playing Basketball Every Thursday

After having a bath (taking a shower) just now, I had a rest myself in the solf sofa for listening Nivana's song, " Come As You Are".  Right, that was it  a especial feeling I like.after I played basketball in the evening.  I always feel lucky for I can play rutine basketball game in every thursday evening.  Since only int the students' age When I was a student, I often used to spent my  much time for it. and didn't  It is unexpected for me to still have there would be days when I got  a job the chance  for playing basketball with colleagues now.  So it must be is really lucky and  is a gift from this job for me.  Tks, God.  What impressed me deeply was it wakes remind me that I was still young and the energy was still inside of me.  Really cool, haha...Hope you like sports also as well, which keep you youth young forever just like Vampaire. Haha...
注意时态, 避免中式英语.
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sorry......
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很多语法错误,不太好改啊

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