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¡Hola!
!Buenas noches!
Me llamo Matthew. Soy australiano. Pero mi mamá (madre) es ella Grecie de Grecia o griega y mi papá (padre) es èl de Italia o italiano. Tengo 29 años. Soy estudiante de musico música tecnología (tecnología musical) . ¡Hablo poco castellano! :(
Good!!! keep practising!!!
¡Hola!
¡Buenas noches!
Me llamo Matthew. Soy Australiano australiano. Pero mi mama mamá es ella Grecie griega y mi papa es èl Italia italiano. Tengo 29 años. Soy estudiante de musico tecnología música electrónica. ¡Hablo poco castellano! :(
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Para empezar no está nada mal.
Comentarte que las nacionalidades en español se escriben con la primera letra en minúscula, en cambio, los países sí se escriben con la primera letra en mayúscula.
Un saludo.
¡Hola!
!Buenas noches!
Me llamo Matthew. Soy Australiano. Pero mi mama es ella Grecie Griega y mi papa es èl Italiano. Tengo 29 años. Soy estudiante de musica tecnologíca (electronica). ¡Hablo poco castellano! :(
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