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pinocchio i hate TV so much ... i almost don't watch TV at all maybe its because it doesn't show my favorite programs ... but yeah ... today suddenly it happened that i watched TV ... it was showing one of those old and crappy movies ... it was "Pinocchio" ... i hated it but it made me to realize something maybe important ... there was a scene where Pinocchio's friend told him that they want to go to somewhere that has no school and we will be free and we can have fun forever ... Pinocchio liked it and followed them ... they went to a wonderland with so many toys and so much fun ... but the owner of the wonderland turned to be a mean one and he turned all of them into donkeys and made them to work for free .... i was wondering ... recently i am always thinking about being free and doing whatever i want ... like the wonderland that Pinocchio went to ... but why it can't be i wonder ... why if you follow your dreams and try to be free you will turn into donkey i wonder ... why the real world is so cruel and it doesn't allow you to be free .... why you always have to suffer to survive ... i really can't find an answer for this ... i just hope someday comes that everyone can live in the way they enjoy ... without turning into donkeys .... i believe that day will come ... but when ?

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Pinocchio

I hate TV so much. I almost don't watch any TV at all, maybe its because it doesn't show my favorite programs - but yeah ...

Today suddenly it happened that I watched TV ... It was showing one of those old and crappy movies. It was "Pinocchio". I hated it, but it made me to realize something that is perhaps important. There was a scene where Pinocchio's friend told him that they want to go to somewhere that has no school and that they would  be free could have fun forever ... Pinocchio liked it and followed them. They went to a wonderland with so many toys and so much fun, but the owner of the wonderland turned to be a mean one and he turned all of them into donkeys and made them to work for free.

I was wondering. Recently I am always thinking about being free and doing whatever I want, like the wonderland that Pinocchio went to. But why it can't be I wonder. Why if you follow your dreams and try to be free will you turn into donkey I wonder. Why is the real world is so cruel and it doesn't allow you to be free? Why do you always have to suffer to survive? I really can't find an answer for this. I just hope someday comes when everyone can live in the way they enjoy, without turning into donkeys. I believe that day will come, but when?

 

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