i am so lucky

i am very happy ,somebody have modificated my composition and given me some advice.before this,i always thougt no body wil help me.but i am still happy everyday.today i come to italki,and saw the advice, i am very exciting.i am so lucky.

I was so lucky. I am very happy because somebody corrected my letter. He gave me some advice. 
Earlier on, I was always thinking that nobody would help me. Today, I came to italki and I saw the change. So, I am very excited. I am so lucky and I am still very happy!