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The Meaning of Happiness
I was reading about happiness. Anyone when he reads the word happiness, the first thing comes to his mind is the thing he loves. But this is wrong. The thing that you loves you can get it again and again, but you will not find the thing which gives you true happiness. The really happiness is yourself and your self-confidence. If you love yourself, Estimated her , keep confidence, believe you deserve better, you know they deserve the best, the evolution of the best ones . You will be happy. Remove negative people from your life. Because they destroys your dreams, your work and your life.
Don't compare your self to anyone. You know your self, then be youself. don't let the past hold you back. Not everything you think about it is the truth. Stay far away from the negative people. I am so Grateful to Gorgeousta for these words.♥
Very nice, great words indeed.
The Meaning of Happiness
I was reading about happiness. Anyone, when reading the word happiness, calls to mind the thing he loves; but this is wrong. The thing that you love will also take him(? Unclear meaning) again and again, but you will not find gives you true happiness. The real happiness is your self and your self-confidence. if you love yourself, Estimated her (unclear meaning) confidence it, believes she deserves better, you know they deserve the best, the evolution of the best ones .
[Be careful of shifting subjects, as when you write in a single sentence, references to yourself, her, it.
The previous sentence can be clarified, by eliminating the commas, and writing simple brief sentences.]
You will be happy. Delete negative people in your life! (We can also say, "eliminate" negative people...) because they Frustrate your dream, your work and your life!
Don't compare yourself to anyone. you know your self. Be who you are (or be yourself).
Don't let the past Hold you back. Not everything you think about it is the fact.
Stay far away from the negative people. I am so Grateful to Gorgeousta for the words ♥
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Shad. These are powerful sentences and your meanings are strong and helpful. One sentence in the middle of the paragraph was difficult to work with. Your essay is very inspirational. I liked that.--Warm Regards, Bruce
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