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The graph shows us the amount in percentage of internal products in three countries' categoies; wealthy, globalizers, and non-globalizers in a period of 3 decades from 1960 until 1990.
Wealthy countries which started with the highest amount in 1960 had a decline over the period. From approximately 5% of internal products until reach a percentaje of 2% by the end of the period. On the other hand the globalizers countries progressed. In 1960 they were the ones who had the less GDP with a figure little over 1%. By the year of 1990 that group overcome Whealthy countries and non-globalizers', reaching a peak of approximately 5%.
Non-globalizers countries experienced a fluctuation over the three decades. In 1960 the internal products' amount started with a number of over 2%, in 1970 that amount went up slightly until get a total over 3%, afterward the amount fell until got an amount of approximately 1% in 1980 and by the end of the period in 1990 the amount increased until reach 1%.
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This graph shows us the percentage of internal products in three countries' categories; wealthy, globalizers, and non-globalizers in a period of 3 decades from 1960 until 1990.
Wealthy countries which started with the highest amount of....... in 1960 had a decline over that period; approximately 5% of internal products until it reached a percentage of 2% by the end of that period.
On the other hand, the globalizers made progress. In 1960, they were the ones who had less GDP with a figure little over 1%. By 1990, that group overtook the wealthy countries and the non-globalizers', reaching a peak of 5%. [ a graph shows exact figures, don't write approximate]
Non-globalizer countries experienced a fluctuation over the three decades. In 1960, their internal product amounts started off with 2%. Then in 1970, that amount went up slightly until it reached 3%. Afterwards, the figures fell down to 1% in 1980. By the end of the period in 1990 the amount increased until reach 1%.??? if it increaed then it must be more. Was it 3%???
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