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Conversation in the womb Two babies was tolking into mother's womb. One of them was believer and another one was unbeliever. The unbeliever baby: Do you believ in life after birth? The believer baby: Yes, of course, everybody knows this. We are here to become stronger. We need to be ready for something in the future. The unbeliever baby: It is rediculous! There is no life after birth! How can you imagine it? The believer baby: I don't know but I believe there will be more light and we will walk and eat with a mouth. The unbeliever baby: It is nonsense! It can't be to walk and eat with the mouth. We have a umbilical cord. It is give us a life. It is not possible! Our life is too short now. The believer baby: I know, it is possible! Everything will be another than now. I can imagine it. The unbeliever baby: Nobody doesn't come back from there. The birth is the end of the life. Our life is a suffering in the dark. The believer baby: No, no! I know it. I know how our life will be after birth. However we will meet our mom. She will care for us. The unbeliever baby: Mom? Do you believe in mom? Where is she now? The believer baby: She is everywhere, around us. We live and move because of her. The unbeliever baby: It is nonsense! I have not seen mom. She doesn't exist. The believer baby: I can't agree with you. Sometimes all sounds become less and I can hear how she sings and I can feel how she strokes our world. I believe our real life wiil start after birth.

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Conversation in the womb

Two babies were talking in their mother's womb. One of them was a believer, and the other one was an unbeliever.

The baby who didn't believe: Do you believe in life after birth?

The baby who believed: Yes, of course.  Everybody knows this. We are here to become stronger. We need to be ready for something in the future.

Unbeliever:  That's ridiculous! There is no life after birth! How can you imagine that?

Believer: I don't know, but I believe there will be more light, and we will walk, and eat with our mouths.

Unbeliever:  That's nonsense!  It's impossible for us to walk and eat with the mouths. We have an umbilical cord. It gives us life.  It is not possible! Our life is too short now.

Believer: I know, it is possible! Everything will be different than now. I can imagine it.

Unbeliever: Nobody comes from there. Birth is the end of the life. Our life is a suffering in the dark.

Believer: No, no! I know how it will be. I know how how our life will be after birth.  However We will meet our mom. She will care for us.

Unbeliever: Mom? Do you believe in mom? Where is she now?

Believer: She is everywhere, around us. We live and move because of her.

Unbeliever:  That's nonsense! I have not seen mom. She doesn't exist.

Believer: I can't agree with you. Sometimes there is less noise, and I can hear how she sings,  and I can feel how she soothes our world.  I believe our real life wiil start after birth.

 

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A conversation in the womb

Two babies was tolking into mother's womb. One of them was believer and another one was unbeliever.

The unbeliever baby: Do you believ in life after birth?

The believer baby: Yes, of course, everybody knows this. We are here to become stronger. We need to be ready for something in the future.

The unbeliever baby: It is rediculous! There is no life after birth! How can you imagine it?

The believer baby: I don't know but I believe there will be more light and we will walk and eat with a mouth.

The unbeliever baby: It is nonsense! It can't be to walk and eat with the mouth. We have a umbilical cord. It is give us a life. It is not possible! Our life is too short now.

The believer baby: I know, it is possible! Everything will be another than now. I can imagine it.

The unbeliever baby: Nobody doesn't come back from there. The birth is the end of the life. Our life is a suffering in the dark.

The believer baby: No, no! I know it. I know how our life will be after birth. However we will meet our mom. She will care for us.

The unbeliever baby: Mom? Do you believe in mom? Where is she now?

The believer baby: She is everywhere, around us. We live and move because of her.

The unbeliever baby: It is nonsense! I have not seen mom. She doesn't exist.

The believer baby: I can't agree with you. Sometimes all sounds become less and I can hear how she sings and I can feel how she strokes our world. I believe our real life wiil start after birth.

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