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Conversation in the womb
Two babies were talking in their mother's womb. One of them was a believer, and the other one was an unbeliever.
The baby who didn't believe: Do you believe in life after birth?
The baby who believed: Yes, of course. Everybody knows this. We are here to become stronger. We need to be ready for something in the future.
Unbeliever: That's ridiculous! There is no life after birth! How can you imagine that?
Believer: I don't know, but I believe there will be more light, and we will walk, and eat with our mouths.
Unbeliever: That's nonsense! It's impossible for us to walk and eat with the mouths. We have an umbilical cord. It gives us life. It is not possible! Our life is too short now.
Believer: I know, it is possible! Everything will be different than now. I can imagine it.
Unbeliever: Nobody comes from there. Birth is the end of the life. Our life is a suffering in the dark.
Believer: No, no! I know how it will be. I know how how our life will be after birth. However We will meet our mom. She will care for us.
Unbeliever: Mom? Do you believe in mom? Where is she now?
Believer: She is everywhere, around us. We live and move because of her.
Unbeliever: That's nonsense! I have not seen mom. She doesn't exist.
Believer: I can't agree with you. Sometimes there is less noise, and I can hear how she sings, and I can feel how she soothes our world. I believe our real life wiil start after birth.
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A conversation in the womb
Two babies was tolking into mother's womb. One of them was believer and another one was unbeliever.
The unbeliever baby: Do you believ in life after birth?
The believer baby: Yes, of course, everybody knows this. We are here to become stronger. We need to be ready for something in the future.
The unbeliever baby: It is rediculous! There is no life after birth! How can you imagine it?
The believer baby: I don't know but I believe there will be more light and we will walk and eat with a mouth.
The unbeliever baby: It is nonsense! It can't be to walk and eat with the mouth. We have a umbilical cord. It is give us a life. It is not possible! Our life is too short now.
The believer baby: I know, it is possible! Everything will be another than now. I can imagine it.
The unbeliever baby: Nobody doesn't come back from there. The birth is the end of the life. Our life is a suffering in the dark.
The believer baby: No, no! I know it. I know how our life will be after birth. However we will meet our mom. She will care for us.
The unbeliever baby: Mom? Do you believe in mom? Where is she now?
The believer baby: She is everywhere, around us. We live and move because of her.
The unbeliever baby: It is nonsense! I have not seen mom. She doesn't exist.
The believer baby: I can't agree with you. Sometimes all sounds become less and I can hear how she sings and I can feel how she strokes our world. I believe our real life wiil start after birth.
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