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I really feel that it's hard to work! Although i just worked for 3 hours today,i feel really very tired. I have knowed that it's diffcuit to make money! I're no longer allowed to spend the partent's money! But i will do the job all the time! Nothing can beat me!

Hello, Sylvia. I have made a few suggestions to correct a few grammatical things. In the title you call it 'fighting' but I would suggest 'Striving' would be better as this means trying your best against difficult odds. Fighting refers more to hitting people. Each of your sentences ends with an exclamation mark which is unusual. Keep up your the spirit!

fighting3

I really feel that it's hard working (to work) ! Although I (i)  just worked for 3 hours today, I (i) feel really very tired. I know (have knowed) that it's difficult (diffcuit) to make money! I'm (I're) no longer allowed to spend my parents (the partent's) money! But I (i)  will continue with the job (do the job all the time) ! Nothing will defeat (can beat)  me!