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Need proofreading : Car for Sale Ad
As an alien in the US, whose mother tongue is not English, I have to be very careful on writing whenever it comes to something more than facebook post or italki Q&A board. I don't like to confuse people, nor I don't want to look stupid:(
Now, I'm trying to sell my car, and this is the ad that I'm going to put at the local grocery store. I want to make sure that the ad is not confusing and has least but enough information. Any advice will be appreciated. Thanks!
Note:
I'm wondering if I should mention the color. It's some gold-ish silver, but not really true silver. I'll color print, anyway.
My personal email address is hidden for this notebook entry.
It will be great if you could correct this post itself, as well.
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For Sale
(photo)
2001 HONDA Civic LX
137100mile, automatic, 4 door sedan
owned by one non-smoking Japanese owner
Some wear & tear, but regularly maintained and runs well.
Asking $3300.
Contact : Chihiro Ito (######@gmail.com)
日本語でどうぞ。
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It looks like a very well-written ad to me Chihiro---Warm Regards, Bruce
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