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my travelling plan My Travelling Plan My name is Barramee Mahayossanunt. I’m an engineer who graduated from Chiang Mai University. I have always dreamt about travel abroad since I have never been to any other countries farer than Thai neighborhood like Laos, Burma and, Malaysia. I am so interested in travelling abroad because it will make me have broader a perspective about the global world. Last month, I heard about the Working and Holiday program and I did not hesitate to apply. I think that travelling in Australia, one of the most beautiful countries in the world, will give me more experience of foreign cultures since Australia is a country that has variety of geography and also rich in culture. And another advantage of travelling in Australia is a good opportunity to improve my English skills, which is very necessary among international business nowadays. If I granted with working and holiday visa, I will go to Australia and travel to as many places as possible. The first place I want to visit is Sydney, one of the oldest cities and the center of business, because I have a cousin who lives in there. She will provide me an accommodation for a while until I am familiar with the place I will find the way to travel on my own. Moreover, starting with the big city will be easier to adapt since it is a lot more convenience to travel by public transport and look for some jobs to support my trip’s expense. The second place I am going to go is Adelaide. I heard that it is a very beautiful and peaceful city. It is not too large like Sydney and not too small like other suburb areas. I will have learnt about another side of Australia from this city. In addition, I heard that University of Adelaide has a lot of reputation in engineering courses. Therefore, it will provide me a chance to get close to and survey the university that I would like to apply in next year. Finally, I think the working and holiday is a very good program for young adult, like me, to explore the world by spending a very precious year in Australia which is one of the leaders in terms of economy, tourism, and education. People who have pasted the program will gain more experience that can perfectly use it to develop themselves and their countries. And I hope that one of them is me.

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My Travelling Plan
My name is Barramee Mahayossanunt. I’m an engineer who graduated from Chiang Mai University. I have always dreamt about travelling abroad since  I have never been to any other countries farer than Thai neighborhood except Laos, Burma and, Malaysia, that are Thai neighborhs. I am so interested in travelling abroad, because it will make me have (give me a )? broader a perspective about the global world. Last month, I heard (found out) about the Working and Holiday program, and I did not hesitate to apply. I think that travelling in to Australia, one of the most beautiful countries in the world, will give me more experience better understanding of foreign cultures, since Australia is a beautiful country that has variety of geography and also rich in culture. And another advantage of travelling in to Australia - that it gives a good opportunity to improve my English skills, which is very necessary important ? among for doing international business nowadays.
If I would be granted with working and holiday visa, I will go to Australia and travel to as many places as possible. The first place I want to visit is Sydney, one of the oldest cities and the center of business, because I have a cousin who lives in there. She will provide me an accommodation for a while until I am will become? familiar with the place, and I will find the way to travel on my own. Moreover, starting with the big city will be easier to adapt since it is a lot more convenient to travel by public transport and look for some jobs to support my trip’s expense. The second place I am going to go - is Adelaide. I heard that it is a very beautiful and peaceful city. It is not  too large like  Sydney, and not too small like other suburb areas. I will have learnt about another side of Australia from ? this city. In addition, I heard that University of Adelaide has a lot of reputation in good engineering courses. Therefore, it will provide me a chance to get close, to and survey the university that I would like to apply in on the next year.
Finally, I think the working and holiday is a very good program for young adult, like me, to explore the world by spending a very precious year in Australia which is one of the leaders in terms of economy, tourism, and education. People who have passted the program, will gain more experience, that they can perfectly use it to develop themselves and their countries. And I hope, that one of them is me.

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