my home town

Hi ,everyone ,I'm glad to join italki .I can make some friends with someone from all around the world .
I come from Sichuan province in china. there are some kinds of delicious food .haha.....because I like eating .so,i first remember that .there are famous of Peking opera. suddenly turn hostile is the best classic . If you come here , you don't miss that . On the other hand, natural environment also is the best , you can fell in natural .On the other hand , people are very friendshp in Sichuan . their's hobby is mahjong . If you come here , you can see that pepole are playing mahjong everywhere !
Welcome to my hometown ---Chengdu !

My home town

Hi ,everyone. I'm glad to join italki. I can make some friends with people from all around the world .
I come from Sichuan province in China. There are many kinds of delicious food. Haha.....because I like eating, I first remember that. There is the famous of Peking opera. "Suddenly Turn Hostile" is the best classic. If you come here , you can't miss that. On the one hand, the natural environment also is the best, you can feel comfortable in a natural setting. On the other hand , pepole are very friendly in Sichuan . Their hobby is mahjong . If you come here, you can see that people are playing mahjong everywhere !
Welcome to my hometown ---Chengdu !

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