My first essay:about me.
i'32years old,graduated from university for 8years.now,working as a goverment officer.
i am eager for English learning to widen my horizon.
I wonder having some chances to increase my income by improving my capacity.
Today I received the letter of graduate admission from Dalian University of Technology.
when I'm pleased with this,I'm worry about the charge for tuition.
Anyhow,it's a good news to me.
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My first essay:about me.
I am 32years old, having graduated from university 8 years ago .Now, I'm working as a goverment officer.
I am eager to learn English learning in order to widen my horizons.
I wonder about having some chance to increase my income by improving my capacity.
Today I received a letter of graduate admission to the Dalian University of Technology.
While I'm pleased with this,I'm also worried about the cost of my tuition.
Anyhow,it's good news for me.
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Welcome to italki. I visited Dalian in 2011. It's a beautiful place by the sea. Good luck:)
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