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Saturday
Today is Saturday , but I'm working , that's too bad ! It's raining outside , my heart have been to fly another place . There are many different of beautiful flowers , birds , butterflies and no troubles , no tears , no pressures , not alone in this place , eveything is very nice.It's one of my dream,but right now still working :(
Saturday
Today is Saturday and (, but) I'm working but (,) that's just too bad ! Outside, it's raining but inside (,) my heart is in (have been to fly) another place. Some place where there (There) are many different kinds of beautiful flowers , birds and (,) butterflies. Somewhere trouble-free (and no troubles ,) with no tears or (,no) pressures. Yet I am (,) not alone in this place. Everything is so perfect. (eveything is very nice) It's one of my dreams to be in such a place (dream,) but, right now, I am still working.
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