A Sad Day
Yesterday, a friend made a date with me, and he invited me to attend a party with him today.Unfortunately, there was a heavy rain last night,and today is rainy.As a result ,we had to cancel the appointment, which had disturbed my schdule. What a bad day it is .
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A Sad Day
Yesterday, a friend made a date with me, and he inviting me to attend a party with him today. Unfortunately, there was a heavy rain last night, and today is still rainy. As a result, we had to cancel the appointment our date, which had disturbed upset my schdule other plans. What a bad day it is.
Be careful of the choice of words. You used formal businesslike words (attend, appointment, schedule, etc) when describing something friendly and casual.
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A Sad Day
Yesterday, a friend made a date with me, and he invited me to attend a party with him today. Unfortunately, there was a heavy rain last night, and today it was rainy. As a result, we had to cancel the appointment, and this has disturbed disrupted my schedule. What a bad day it is has been!
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A Sad Day
Yesterday a friend_invited me to go to a party with him today. Unfortunately, it was pouring last night and it is still so today. As a result, we had to cancel the date, which has disturbed my schedule. What a bad day! Sorry! :(
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