军训生活

In China, the first lesson of university entrance is to the that of military training. Why is want military training desireable? The First: military training can not only cultivate students' hard character, remind everybody in the university not to play, but also is moves students towards knowledge and life experience; second, from all corners of the country students can know each other during the period of military training, develope a sense of unity, and enhance each other's feelings. Third: the military involves a physical fitness test, which can let the students find physical strength so as to develop later in life constantly enhanced physique later in life. My military life is full of joy and bitterness. Bitter is scorching sun overhead, a war army posture for an hour, the waist straight collection together, sweat that you cannot clean, called bugle shouted until hoarse. Music is the classmates again painstakingly trying[?] to carry on, the rest of the time together singing and laughing together, so we are no longer strangers strange. At the end of the military training exercise we harvest awards that we gain in repayment for our sweat, which we are very proud of! Although it has been a year since military training has beena year, but I still miss the short days that will be my lifelong unforgettable experience. There are two months, students have return to school, they also must experience this pain and joy this.  I hope that they will cherish it.

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