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The Revolution Has Begun #ChangeBrazil Probably you have heard about the protests in Brazil. You may think that the reason for these protests is only the expensive transportation that we use everyday. No, that's not the only reason. There are some aspects about the Brazil that you don't know. We have to pay abusive taxes everyday, on the other hand we don't have a good public medical assistence. In the education, the teachers have low wages and the investments in the education are low. The politicians are corrupts and they must have others priorities, they have wasted much public money to build new stadiums for the next world cup. We really don't need more stadiums, we need new schools, universities and hospitals. People die waiting for a doctor in the hospitals. Many children grow and often don't have any opportunity to study. I wonder if building stadiums is really needed for now. I want to say to the world that I'm brazilian and I have a big pride to tell this. I'm ready to fight for a better quality of life for everyone. I'll fight for liberty! We have the power to change our own reality. Each one of us. The revolution has begun!

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The Revolution Has Begun #ChangeBrazil

You have probably heard about the protests in Brazil. You may think that the reason for these protests is just the expensive transportation that we use everyday. No, that's not the only reason. There are some aspects about the Brazil that you don't know. We have to pay high taxes every day, on the other hand  but we don't have a good public medical assistance. In the education system, the teachers have low wages and the investments in the education are low. The politicians are corrupts and they need to have others priorities, they have wasted too much public money building new stadiums for the next world cup. We really don't need more stadiums, we need new schools, universities and hospitals. People die waiting for a doctor in the hospitals. Many children grow and often don't have any opportunity to study. I wonder if building stadiums is really needed for now. I want to say to the world that I'm Brazilian and I have great pride saying this. I'm ready to fight for a better quality of life for everyone. I'll fight for liberty! We have the power to change our own reality. Each one of us. The revolution has begun!

 

 

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