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TRY HARD &BE BRAVE Today ,my friend invited me have dinner.we are eight girls in the same class. we can stay four years together.so l think I am good luck .we have different character but we are each together good ;).my friend will help me when l am nauious. and am bad feel .they will said :sweety ,are you ok ?"l am moved .today ,with seven girls to had dinner,we eat more ,drinkmore. say more.we know we have this time not so many. so we saw each other but said nothing . yeah,l felt so bad when l go to this college.because l can get my heart goal .so every try hard ,yes ,every think you are them friend ,but no one can really care about you heart.everyday is same ,go to class.after class,we have lunch ,then a nap ,go to class,then had dinner. then go to dormitory. yeah is just like water. but second year,l try to adapt kind of life, can learn how to with myself . yeah ,now is ok . l learned so much abount how to deal with somenthing . what's so ever .try hard &be brave. whatever the life better or worse. we must cherish~

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TRY HARD & BE BRAVE

Today, my friends invited me to have dinner. We are eight girls who study in the same class. We can stay four years together, so l think I have good luck (or I am lucky). We have different characters but we are all good together ;). My friends will help me when l am nervous (?) or feeling bad. They will say: Sweety, are you ok? l am moved. Today, with seven girls to have dinner, we ate more , drank more, talked more. We know we don't have many times like these. 
so we saw each other but said nothing .
Yeah, l felt so bad when l go to this college. In order to get my heart's goal, I always try hard, yes, always think you are their friend, but no one can really care about your heart. Everyday is the same: go to class. After class, we have lunch, then a nap, go to class, then have dinner. Then go to
dormitory. Yeah it is just like water. But in the second year, l am trying to adapt to this kind of life, and I can learn how to be with myself. Yeah, now it is ok. l learned so much about how to deal with something. Whatsoever, try hard & be brave. Whatever life is better or worse. We must cherish it~

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I truly know how you feel, but cheer up and never give up. You will find someone who will really care about your heart. By the way, your drawings are very beautiful. ^^

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