SWEET TREATS

Tomorrow will be the first regular day of school in college and as part of my promised to my best friend and my officemate whose who are going back to school, I will buy cookies and cream chocolates. I told them that when I was a kid, every first day of school my mum gave me anything sweets like candies or chocolates. I miss the life of being a student. I am so proud of them, and I am happy.


Please do some corrections.hehe..

Well done, you've made very few mistakes :)

My only other suggestion is to perhaps consider using "colleague" instead of "officemate", as "officemate" isn't really used in the UK.  (But it might be used more in other English-speaking countries e.g. the USA)