In the Morning

I don't have so much free time because of the long working time hours which last from 8am in the morning to 8 or 10 pm at night. I can't stand this kind of company culture at the beginning, but now I just try to accept it. I read some good notes from another's blog, complaining is the worst thing to fight against fate. Every happy family has the same story, every unhappy ones are all different. Foreign friends always tell me that Chinese people live under so much pressure, trying to be happy no matter what.

I crushed (?) on a new program which is called In the Morning from website (on the internet - ?). In the Morning was formed by a group of young people, early to bed and early to get up in the morning. They often go to sleep in at 10 pm and get up in at 5 am in the morning, then bestow which gives them the early time to read, write and do exercise. The main inspiration of In the Morning is not just to keep a good balance for rest, but a new power (new energy - ?) to think about life. I tried, its really amazing.

Many young people sign in their name and write down their feelings in in the morning when they get up, its very hard to keep on up with it because of our study, work or some urgent issue. I try to hold on it as far as I can. Hope to meet more friend in italki and join in In the Morning.

I am picking up Japanese, still in it is a slow process.

Life is a journey, enjoy the ride.

I can understand most of what you write, but you had a little trouble with missing parts of speech and proper tense and punctuation spacing. Practice can only make you better! Keep writing.

In the morning

I don't have so much free time because of the long working time which lasting form 8am in the morning to 8 or 10 pm at night. I can't stand this kind of company culture at the beginning, but now just try to accept it.I read some good notes from other's blog, complain is the worst thing to fight against fate.Every happy family has the same story, every unhappy ones are all different.Foreign friends always telling me that Chinese people live under
so much pressure, try to be happy no matter what.

I crushed on a new program which call in the morning from website, in the morning was formed by a group of young people , early to bed and early to get up in the morning,they often sleep in 10 pm and get up in 5 am in the morning, then bestow the early time to read ,write, doing exercise. The main inspiration of in the morning is not just to keep a good balance for rest but a new power to think about life.I tried ,its really amazing.

Many young peolpe sign in their name and write down their feeling in in the morning when they get up, its very hard to keep on it because of our study, work or some ergent issue. I try to hold on it as far as I can.Hope to meet more friend in italki and join in in the morning.

I am picking up Japanese, still in slowly process.

Life is a journey,enjoy the ride.

Hello, Connie. Your article is very well thought out and written, so your thinking in English is quite advanced. I have made a few amendments to correct any grammatical issues and to make the passage flow better. In the title we usually use initial capitals for most words. The word program is American English, in UK we write this as programme. In the second paragraph you have a very long sentence separated by commas. When writing a sentence you need to magine reading it out as if speaking it. Nobody would speak that number of words without pausing for breath. So, you just need to break it down into smaller sentences which I have tried to do.

In the Morning

I don't have so much free time because of MY (the) long working time, which LASTS FROM (lasting form) 8am in the morning to 8 or 10 pm at night. I COULDN’T (can't) stand this kind of company culture at the beginning, but now just try to accept it. I read some good notes from ANOTHER PERSON’S (other's) blog, WHICH SAID TO complain is the worst thing. YOU SHOULD JUST ACCEPT YOUR (to fight against) fate. Every happy family has the same story, every unhappy ones are all different. Foreign friends ARE always telling me that Chinese people live under so much pressure, SO try to be happy, no matter what.

I CAME ACROSS (crushed on) a new programME, which YOU CAN call in the morning from A website. (, in the morning) IT was formed by a group of young people, WHO GO TO BED EARLY AND ALSO RISE EARLY. (, early to bed and early to get up in the morning,) THEY (they) often sleep AT (in) 10 pm and get up in 5 am in the morning, then USE (bestow) the early time to read ,write, AND DO (doing) exercise. The main inspiration FOR (of) RISING EARLY (in the morning) is not just to keep a good balance for rest, but TO PROVIDE a new power to think about life. I tried IT AND IT’S (its) really amazing.

Many young PEOPLE (people) sign in their name and write down their feelingS (in) in the morning when they get up. IT’S (, its) very hard to keep on DOING it because of our study, work or some URGENT (ergent) issue. I try to KEEP IT UP FOR (hold on it) as LONG (far) as I can. I h(H)ope to meet more friendS in italki and join in, EARLY in the morning.

I am STILL PROGRESSING IN (picking up) Japanese, (still) BUT IT IS A SLOW (in slowly) process.

Life is a journey, enjoy the ride.

Very good and interesting to read.