Hot day and lazy me
This term is coming to the end, the majority of my courses was done,so today i am off agian. What shall i do such a hot day! Because of this,i suggest my roommates to play an especially popular game called三国杀 online.The game has 4 roles,they are called Lord(1)、Loyal Minister(2)、Provocateur(1) and Ubaxaha Hvlha(4).Lord and Loyal Minister are a team,if they killed all Ubaxaha Hvlhas,they win.As long as Lord dies,Ubaxaha Hvlha win.but if Provocateur want to win,all people should be killed except he and Lord,and he kills Lord.Of course,Provocateur is the most challenging role,it hardly win. there is barely time to enjoy ourselves.We really love the game.I have been about 1 year not play online game,as i am always addicted to online game,I was such absorbed in Daguai upgrade and skipped classes constantly before.But now i think i am under control.Ok,i go to play the game.haha, just kidding!
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Hot day and lazy me ------------> A Hot Lazy Day
*My correction might still have errors. I'm confused with the rules of the game but I tried my best.
*I also edited the title: A Hot Lazy Day!
You did a good job! Just remember that it's important to have smooth flow of idea in a paragraph ^^
*Orange - Words I added
* Pink - Proper capitalization
*Blue - Proper punctuation marks
~ Have a nice day ^_____________^
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