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English diary!! Since last on saturday , i go to a dance society because i registered dance society i like to meet new people , In there for two hours i learn dance skills . last on saturday i had feeling nervous and exciting because i had nerver been this kind of experience . i learn and dance with partner but some time my body do not move as feeling , it is clumsy OMG OMG . For two hours , dance teracher teach to me and another people and i dance dance dance after finish dance society , society people talk about dance and another subjects , we are all freshman . hahahaha I also talk to some one . Every on saturday give to be a tonic to me , because i work every weekday , it is tired and boring life. any way how to overcome my body clumsy OMG some one advise to me "you listen to music every day ".

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English diary!!

Since last on Saturday , I have gone to a dance society. because I registered for the dance society because I like to meet new people. In there for two hours, I learn dance skills .
Last saturday I was feeling nervous and excited because I had never had this kind of experience.
I learned and danced with a partner, but sometimes my body did not move to the music, it was clumsy OMG OMG .
For two hours, dance teacher taught me and another people and I danced, danced, danced
After finishing dance society , the members talked about dance and another subjects. We are all freshmen. hahahaha
I also talked to someone .
Every on saturday is like a tonic to me, because I work every weekday and it is a tiring and boring life.
Anyway, how do I overcome my clumsy body? clumsy OMG Someone advised to me that "you listen to music every day".

 

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