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Report Essay pt2
Parking and courtyard
The parking was marked down on car’s places number. The respondents commented again on the lack of support from the mayor and damned the impotence of school leaders. The large courtyard with a few tables and chairs placed under the trees scored very well on all points of view, apart from the ice that formed over the entire yard in the winter. A teacher who was interviewed said “It’s a real danger for everyone.”
Staff
The staff in general was rated very highly for the service they provide. Particularly, the good qualification and very good communication skills of teachers were highly appreciated, but the librarians were characterized “rather unfriendly sometimes”.
Course books
There were a number of adult students who felt that the books for level 5 are packed with too much information and it is something that needs addressing.
Registration date and students fees
Over 50%-mainly consisted of parents -claimed that the sequence of the date registration is scheduled improperly. Price-wise, B.C. was compared favourably to others, although some of the parents strongly believe that the school is making efforts only in its best commercial interest and, consequently, is putting off its loyal students. In order to illustrate the gravity of this matter, here’s what some parents said: “My child doesn’t completely finish well a course before the school asks him to pay for the next one.” “Why do I have to pay for the next term in the middle of the current one?” “The discounts are a mere drop in the ocean.” “The courses are far too expensive .” “They should adjust the prices according to our wages.”
Recommendations
The buildings desperately need consolidation to reduce the seismic risk; the parking urgently needs expanding. Therefore, I’d strongly recommend a better collaboration with the city mayor to tackle these two problems. I’d certainly suggest that more consideration is shown to the disabled students by providing them the necessary assistance. The school should seriously consider offering more options, such as convenient date registration and higher discounts for its loyal students. A different approach, perhaps with a more transparent and objective manner initiated by the school leaders, would serve efficiently to the benefit of both B.C. and its students.
[Again, very good.]
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