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On Thursday, May 9, a couple Mr and Mrs Vasquez went to the Rustica’s Restaurant. Suddenly, the man noticed through the window another man called Edward Lama. He observed that this man took out a gun and started shooting into the sky. Terrified couple tried to escape, but unfortunately the offender saw their and struck by car into Mr Vasquez’s. Then he killed Mrs Vasquez by shoot. The couple died instantly. At the end, the murderer wanted to commit suicide but the police arrived immediately. The murderer has been arrested.
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Help me correct my mistakes.. :) thank you..
On Thursday, May 9, a couple Mr and Mrs Vasquez went to the Rustica’s Restaurant. Suddenly, the man noticed through the window another man called Edward Lama. He observed that this man took out a gun and started shooting into the sky. Terrified, the couple tried to escape, but unfortunately the offender saw their them and struck by car into Mr Vasquez’s with his car. Then he killed Mrs Vasquez by shooting her. The couple died instantly. At the end, the murderer wanted to commit suicide but the police arrived immediately. The murderer has been arrested.
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