The murder
This murder was happend the thursday 9 of May. A couple were eating and dancing in the Rustica's Restaurant while one man are seeing through the windows suddenly The man called Edward Lama, took his gun and started shooting to the sky, while he was looking to the couple, They took the opportunity to run to the door and tried to go, but they can't and The man crashed his car into Vasquez's body, leaving him dead instantly, then shot to Mrs. Vasquez. The murderer Edward Lama tried to finish with his life but the police arrived inmediately and took away the gun.
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The murder
This murder happened on Thursday 9th of May. A couple were eating and dancing in the Rustica's Restaurant while one man was looking through the windows. Suddenly the man called Edward Lama, took his gun and started shooting to the sky. While he was looking at the couple, they took the opportunity to run to the door and tried to escape, but they couldn't and the man crashed his car into Vasquez's body leaving him dead instantly, then shot to Mrs. Vasquez. The murderer Edward Lama tried to finish with his life but the police arrived immediately and took away the gun.
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for my english class,
remember about using verbs in past form :)
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