lost my jop

i just lost my jop,so i have much time,i spend a half month stay Tibet.it's a special area, there are many lake like mirrors.in this palce,they call these lake is the sacred lake.and in Jokhang Temple have a lot of pious persons around walk .yaks is free walk on the road.every car drived from them never alarm.The harmony between man and nature.

I am so sorry, Lemon. For every misfortune there is something positive. Nobody has bad luck all the time. We say in the U.K. that 'every cloud has a silver lining'. The positive for you was that you got to see this beautiful scenery, which you may otherwise never have visited.

With your article, the title should be in capital letters. Job is correct spelling. I may write it as follows:

Lost My Job

I just lost my job, so, having a lot more time, spent a half month stay in Tibet. It's a special area, with many lakes, like mirrors. In this place, the lake is known as the Sacred Lake and in the Jokhang Temple there are many monks walking around. Yaks are free to walk on the road and every car driven never causes them alarm. It's wonderful to see the harmony that exists between man and nature.

after lost my jop

i just lost my jop,so i have much time,i spend a half month stay Tibet.it's a special area, there are many lake like mirrors.in this palce,they call these lake is the sacred lake.and in Jokhang Temple have a lot of pious persons around walk .yaks is free walk on the road.every car drived from them never alarm.The harmony between man and nature.