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The baby bird In November 2oo8, Guillermina, my older daughter found a defenseless baby bird on the ground under a big tree. In addition, the baby bird was almost a few days of life and of course, couldn’t fly. So, Guillermina decided bring it home because she thought that the baby bird would die whether no one fed it or perhaps killed by a stray cat. Next day, she took the baby bird to a pet shop. The vet told her the bird was a thrush and these kind of birds didn’t live in captivity moreover, one way or another the bird finally would die. She came back home so sad, however she was disposed to make every effort to save the baby bird.

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The baby bird

In November 2oo8, Guillermina, my older daughter, found a defenseless baby bird on the ground under a big tree.
In addition, The baby bird was only a fews days old almost a few days of life and of course, couldn’t fly.
So, Guillermina decided to bring it home because she thought that the baby bird would die if whether no one fed it or that it would be perhaps killed by a stray cat.
Next day, she took the baby bird to a pet shop. The vet told her the bird was a thrush and these kinds of birds didn’t live in captivity and moreover, one way or another, the bird eventually finally would die.
She came back home so sad, however she planned was disposed to make every effort to save the baby bird.

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The baby bird

In November 2008, Guillermina, my older daughter, found a defenseless baby bird on the ground under a big tree.
In addition, The baby bird was almost a few days of life only a few days old and of course, it couldn’t fly.
So, Guillermina decided bring it home because she thought that the baby bird would die whether either because no one would feed it or perhaps killed by it would be killed by a stray cat.
The next day, she took the baby bird to a pet shop. The vet told her the bird was a thrush and that these kinds of birds didn’t they don't live in captivity. moreover, One way or another the bird finally would eventually/finally die.
She came back home so sad. However, she was disposed to make every effort to save the baby bird.

 

Great job, Daniel. This was interesting to read, too.

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