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Tonight I had a
wonderful dinner with all of my flatmates and other friends. We went to an
indian restaurant where close to our university.but and we all think thought
the food tasted
of food quite nice here there.10
people shared the foods and while laughing and talking about [to?] each other.Tom is a guy who from French
France and who
is learning music here. He teaches us
French. Micky is a beautiful girl who comes from Italian Italy.
She recommended us which several places worth to
visiting if we travelling to Roman
Rome,
I am learning from a korean friend how to cooking
korean food and we made planings to cooking next week(next week is my turn). and Then Micky
suggested went going to a Pub when we finished our after dinner, so we
spendt 3 hours in a quiet pub.but I am
not good at drinking and just drink a little then my face soon became red,but Tom make made fun of me because I only drink drank 1/3 of a glass of wine
in my glass.yes,I am bad at drinking,haha.anyway,we had a nice time and
good night everybody!
Good, but make sure you put spaces after full stops and commas: perfect, because not perfect,because. When you write about the past, most of your tenses will be past too.
Tonight I had a
wonderful dinner with all of my flatmates and other friends. We went to an
indian restaurant where close to our university.but and we all think thought
the food tasted
of food quite nice here there.10
people shared the foods and while laughing and talking about [to?] each other.Tom is a guy who from French
France and who
is learning music here. He teaches us
French. Micky is a beautiful girl who comes from Italian Italy.
She recommended us which several places worth to
visiting if we travelling to Roman
Rome,
I am learning from a korean friend how to cooking
korean food and we made planings to cooking next week(next week is my turn). and Then Micky
suggested went going to a Pub when we finished our after dinner, so we
spendt 3 hours in a quiet pub.but I am
not good at drinking and just drink a little then my face soon became red,but Tom make made fun of me because I only drink drank 1/3 of a glass of wine
in my glass.yes,I am bad at drinking,haha.anyway,we had a nice time and
good night everybody!
Good, but make sure you put spaces after full stops and commas: perfect, because not perfect,because. When you write about the past, most of your tenses will be past too.
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