bin's notebook entry: Oct 20, 2010
last weekend,i went to shanghai with my friends to visit the expo.we spent most of our time in waitining queues.there were soooooooo many people.we only visited a few pavilions.i like italian pavilon best.it is really beautiful and artistic.everything is art,dresses,shoes,foods,chairs,cars,wines,robots...and even spaghettis!i knew little about italy,but now i sort of fall in love with this country haha~~by the way,shanghai is beautiful too.we also enjoyed ourselves in waitan.
while in shanghai,we met two turkishs.what really surprised me is their fluent chinese.even though with a little accent,but in my eyes,for a foreigner,their chinese is perfect.i guess they dont need any language help anymore.i feel impressed and encouraged and i'm very sure everyone can master a foreign language as well as you are willing to,and insist working on it.
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bin's notebook entry: Oct 20, 2010
Last weekend, I went to Shanghai with my friends to visit the expo. We spent most of our time waiting in queues. There were soooooooo many people. We only visited a few pavilions. I liked the Italian pavilon best. It is really beautiful and artistic. Everything is art: dresses, shoes, food, chairs, cars, wines, robots...and even spaghettis! I knew little about Italy, but now I have sort of fallen in love with this country haha~~by the way, Shanghai is beautiful too. We also enjoyed ourselves in Waitan.While in Shanghai, we met two ( Turks or say people from Turkey ). What really surprised me was their fluent Chinese. Even though they had a slight accent, I thought that for a foreigner their Chinese was perfect. I guess they don't need any language help anymore. I feel impressed and encouraged and I'm very sure everyone can master a foreign language as well as you are willing to, and insist on working at it.
很有意思!你英文非常好。I didn't know Italy was known for its robots, haha.
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