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A nice day Today is Wednesday, The sun is shining, it's so comfortable. After the class, I rode a bicycle around the city. Wow, I don't know how long have I enjoyed such beautiful sights. It's enjoyable. People are always busy, so that we ignore a lot of beautiful things. But dear friends, please stop to enjoy the scenery along the way occasionally, you will find it beautiful. And it will make you feel enjoyable. Today I found a beautiful place, I want to share with you Wish you have a nice day too

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A nice day

Today is Wednesday,
The sun is shining, it's so comfortable.
After the class, I rode a bicycle around the city.
Wow, I don't know how long have I enjoyed such beautiful sights. It's enjoyable.
People are always busy, so that we ignore a lot of beautiful things.
But dear friends, please stop to enjoy the scenery along the way occasionally, you will find it beautiful.
And it will make you feel enjoyable.
Today I found a beautiful place, I want to share with you
Wish you have a nice day too

 

Hello Cassie: I hope I can help you with your English. What you have written is very emotive and reads well, so does not require a lot of corrections. I may have written as follows: 

 

'A Nice Day 

Today is Wednesday, the sun is shining and it's so comfortable. After the class, I rode a bicycle around the city. Wow!, I can't recall how long it's been since I enjoyed such beautiful sights. People are always so busy, that they fail to appreciate beautiful things. But, dear friends, please stop to enjoy the scenery along the way, occasionally. You will find it beautiful and I am sure it will fill you with happiness. Today, I found a beautiful place that I want to share with you. Hope you had such a nice day, too.'

 

Your written English is very good and you describe things well. 

 

Hope I have been of help to you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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какие красивые места!!! what a beautiful place!!!

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