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Improving my English, help me please :) My parents are called Doris and Jose. My dad was born in Purranque in 1953 and my mom was born in Frutillar in 1960. They got married when my father was thirty and my mother twenty three, that happened in 1983. Yesterday they celebrated thirty years together. My parents had three sons, Andres the older with 27 years old, me 23 and my younger brother Ignacio with 15 years old. Yesterday, for their anniversary they were to dinner in a restaurant, then they come back to the house and we ate a delicious cocktail in family. My father had been working at the fruit factory in Purranque since 1990 when he was fired, he worked eleven years there. Today he is working in a cheese factory called Kumey. My mother only works on the summer for two or three months, and then she can do anything like she wants. Like dancing with her friends or something like that. My parents knew parts of the south of Chile and Argentina because they had visited and worked that places several times.

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Improving my English, help me please :)

My parents names are Doris and Jose. My dad was born in Purranque in 1953, and my mom was born in Frutillar in 1960.

They got married when my father was thirty and my mother twenty three, that happened in 1983. Yesterday they celebrated

thirty years together. My parents had three sons, Andres the older with 27 years old, me 23 and my younger brother

Ignacio is 15 years old.

Yesterday, for their anniversary they went to dinner in a restaurant, then they come back to the house and we had a

delicious cocktail with family.

My father had been working at the fruit factory in Purranque since 1990 when he was fired, he had worked eleven years

there. Today he is working in a cheese factory called Kumey.

My mother only works on the summer for two or three months, and then she can do anything like she wants.

Like dancing with her friends or something like that.

My parents knew parts of the south of Chile and Argentina because they had visited and worked there  several
times.

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