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today i persist to go to libarary alone,i have never thought i would 自习,yes! it's really incredible! so, but i really want to do excel in english! oh ! look my pasage! it's shame to admit i'm a sophomore in college ,what's more ,i pass CET4 and a CET6 in june !! who can help me?! help~help~help~~~~~~~~~~~
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today i persist to go again went to the libarary alone, i have never thought i would 自习 self-study (为什么？）,yes! it's really incredible! so, but i really want to do excel in English! oh ! look my passage! it's shame to admit i'm a sophomore in college ,what's more ,i passed CET4 and a CET6 in last june !! who can help me?! help~help~help~~~~~~~~~~~
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Today I am determined to go to libarary alone, which I have never thought i would do 自习 Yes! It's really incredible, but I really want to do excel in English! Oh! Look my passage! I'm ashamed to admit I'm a sophomore in college. What's more, I must pass CET4 and a CET6 in june !! Who can help me?! help~help~help~~~~~~~~~~~
[Watch your capitalization. Always capitalize the pronoun 'I'. Remember to put a space after all periods and commas, not before them.]
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