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Jobs for Graduates Needless to say more, graduates have increasingly difficulty finding jobs- to say nothing of pleasant occupations. There were approximately 10% new graduates failed to find work in 2012 and the growth trend is undoubted. Various factors contribute to this phenomenon. Firstly, Graduates' personal qualities and attitudes have the greatest impact. In China, quite a part of undergraduates select Financial or Management just because they think these specialties seem more advanced than other subjects. As a result, competitions in these fields are heartbreaking to look at. To the countrary, other unpopular specialties bring good chances to graduates. Here's a branch, graduates' attitudes could be another component. However, their attitudes are influenced by social concept, and we'll discuss it later. Secondly, to some extent, social guidance plays an important role in the low employment rate. On the one hand, it guides corporate demand for the college quality of graduates. Many corporates in China prefer famous colleges' reputation to potential of graduates. From their point of view, compared to making a product from the beginning, possessing a high-quality finished product is much more relaxing. On the other hand, graduates prefer getting high paid even they are novices for their work, limited to boys only. Actually, on one level, this is understandable. It must be seen the number of men is much larger than that of women in China, causing unfairness of mate selection. With the acceleration of the pace of life, a rich husband is more attractive than a poor man. A poor boy temporarily lacking in money and authority has no time to making progress, especially when he finds himself gradually being estranged by his girlfriend his age because a rich young man is always courting her. This is the status now, cruel but real. In terms of solutions, learning more than before when you are still college students is the only way. Although correcting your attitudes is necessary, compared to it, knowledge realise more. With good diplomas, you will get a higher step than others, except a master borning with a silver in his mouth. However, life is limited. Whatever you do is all for your happiness. Therefore, learning is also restricted, And not any love is affected by money. There is no such argument that ordinary people live away from happiness. Try your best to control yourself and control your life.

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Jobs for Graduates

Needless to say more, graduates have increasingly difficulty finding any kind of job - to say nothing of good or suitable jobs pleasant occupations. There were approximately 10% new graduates failed to find work in 2012 and the growth trend is evident undoubted.
Various factors contribute to this phenomenon. Firstly, Graduates' personal qualities and attitudes have the greatest impact(?????? 不明白). In China, a substantial number quite a part of undergraduates select Financial or Management subjects just because they think these specialties seem more advanced than other subjects. As a result, competition in these fields are is discouraging to see heartbreaking to look at.  On the other hand To the countrary, other less unpopular specialties give bring good chances to graduates good opportunities. Here's a branch, graduates' attitudes could be another component (????). However, their attitudes are influenced by social factors(?) concept, and we'll as discussed it later.
Secondly, to some extent, social guidance (? wrong word I am sure, don't know what you mean though) plays an important role in the low employment rate. On the one hand, it guides corporate demand for the graduates from the best educational intstitutions college quality of graduates. Many corporations in China prefer famous colleges' reputation to potential of graduates' performance level . From their point of view, compared to making a product from the beginning, possessing a high-quality finished product is much more important relaxing. On the other hand, male graduates prefer getting high paid pay even they are novices for at their work, limited to boys only (females are the same surely?). Actually, on one level, this is understandable. It must be seen the number of men is much (actually only a little) larger than that of women in China, causing unfairness of mate problems in partner selection (this seems to be a second topic). With the acceleration of the pace of life, a rich husband is more attractive than a poor man (always was surely, with or without pace acceleration). A poor boy temporarily lacking in money and authority has no time to advance himself making progress, especially when he finds himself gradually being estranged by from his girlfriend his age because a rich young man is always courting her. This is the status now, a fact of life cruel but real.
In terms of solutions, learning more than before when you are still college students is the only way. Although correcting change of your attitude is necessary, compared to it, higher skill is more importantknowledge realise more. With good diplomas, you will get a higher step than others, except unless you are born a master borning with a silver spoon in his your mouth.  (you contradict yourself - best college is preferred to high grades, you said it)However, life is limited. Whatever you do is all for your happiness. Therefore, learning is also restricted, And not any love is affected by money (???). There is no such argument that ordinary people live away(???) from happiness. Try your best to control yourself and control your life.

 

This is really hard to correct, because it is unclear what your thinking is, and honestly, some of the thinking is not quite right, so even harder to guess what you mean.  You've chosen a complex subject that is not east to express, so I can only try to guess. Good vocabulary, no bad grammar, but unclear thinking.

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