My journey.

My journey.
We can not astonish people by interesting travelling in our these days, because it has already become a usual thing many years ago. But I want to do this, as my travelling made me think about many things.
I was in a very friendly country – South Korea. I lived in a big city, Seoul. It was at the children's language camp. I had many friends from different countries: Poland, Latvia, Italy, France and others. English language helped me to mix. All people were so different. They wore different dresses, spoke different languages and had different colour of skin. However, they had similar lines. They made friends, loved, missed. I understood that all people are similar.
In the camp, all children lived in rooms for two persons, and a child from one country could live only with a person from another country. I think it is right, because people must associate not only with people of their nation, but others as well.
I liked my travelling very much. And if I want to have new journeys, I must learn languages.
I can not see my friends from the camp now, and it is very sad, but I have understood that any person can become your friend.

[Very good.  We can talk about "the English language" or just "English".  Both are correct, but "English language", with no 'the' is incorrect.]

My journey.

My journey.
Because travelling is so common place nowdays it is difficult to astonish people with our travelling stories. We can not astonish people by interesting travelling in our days, because it has already become an usual thing many years ago. I would however like to tell you about my recent travel to Korea and how much of an impact it has made on me. But I want to do this as my travelling made me think about many things.
I was in a very friendly country – South Korea. I lived in the big city of Seoul. a big city Seoul. I was working at a children's language camp.  It was at the children language camp. I had many friends from different countries: Poland, Latvia, Italy, France and others. The English language helped me to mix easily with all the different people. All people were so different. They wore different dresses, spoke different languages, had different colours of skin. And yet they had some similarities, they made friends, loved friends, and missed them when they were gone.But they had similar lines. They made friends, loved, missed. I understood that all people are similar.
In the camp all children lived in rooms for two people persons. And A child from one country could live only with a person from another country. I think thought this was a good idea it is right, because people should must associate with people of other nations. not only with their nation.
I liked my travelling very much, and I am looking forward to  And if I want to have new journeys. I must learn some new  languages.
I am sad now because I can not see my friends from the camp now. And it is very sad. But I have understood that any person can become your friend.

I am sure it was a rewarding experience and you are correct "any person" can become your friend regardless of what country they come from.  All the best with your life adventures.