Hey Yuancan,

I corrected your entry. Interesting to read something about your experience! Good job by the way. I hope that the correction helps you further.

Regards, OJ

My part-time work

My part-time work is teaching drawing / being an art teacher in the weekend for primary / elementary and junior high school students. I held have the job for since one years and I like it. It does not only let improve my school life are better, but I also i got to experience this job and could teaching some knowledge for to my students / you can also say ' and could teach my students'.
Everything is ok, but one student say said something on last weekend. I don`t kown know and I missed it in fact. The Most of the students drawing in are here just to pass the examination and the parens give them a lot of prerssure. Oh God, help them. The exam is scheduled for the next weekend; i`m so nervous. I hope all the children will be happy to spend every day (with me)...
Thanks for your guidance / help.