Kraft Foods
Today is a special day for me, cause i got an interview in Kraft Foods, i never expected i can be granted with this precious opportunity, as one of the world famous food companys, KF has experienced one hundred years growth,as one of the main segment markets---China has saw its historical development since KF entered China at 1984. now KF has established 8 manufacturing bases in BJ,SH,GZ,SZ,JM, nearly 4000 staff are working at KF,frankly ,i want to be one of them~
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Hi Tony,
Congratulations on your interview with Kraft Foods, you must be very excited. I hope they choose you to work in their company. I've made some corrections to the paragraph below, please let me know if you need me to explain the changes. Your english is very good, I could easily understand what you were saying. The main mistake was that you used comma too much. Comma = ,
Kraft Foods
Today is a special day for me, because I got an interview in at Kraft Foods. I never expected that I can be granted with this precious opportunity. As one of the world famous food companys, KF has experienced one hundred years growth. As one of the main segment markets, China has saw seen its historical development since KF entered China at 1984. Now KF has established 8 manufacturing bases in BJ,SH,GZ,SZ and JM, nearly 4000 staff are working at KF and frankly I want to be one of them~
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