2013.5.5
It's a sunny Sunday today.I got up early to catch bus because my deskmate of high school,Zhu, invited me to her graduation ceremony.It took me at least two and a half hour from zhongshan to her college in Guangzhou. I never like travel by bus,which make me sick every single time.
their dormitories built on the hill.I almost lost there,when l meet Xiao by chance.Actually,I have been there twice.We found out that we were both looking for Zhu's dorm.So,we decided to go togother.And we made it by asking the way and our misty momery.
Afternoon,we,six girls,took many photoes,and had a good time.I was so tired,but,it's still a funny day.
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2013.5.5
It's a sunny Sunday today. I got up early to catch the bus because my deskmate of at high school, Zhu, invited me to her graduation ceremony. It took me at least two and a half hours to travel from zhongshan to her college in Guangzhou. I never like to travel by bus, which because it makes me sick every single time.
Ttheir dormitories are built on the a hill. I almost got lost there, when l meet Xiao by chance accident. Actually,I have been there twice. We found out that we were both looking for Zhu's dorm. So,we decided to go togoether. And we made it by asking the way and our misty momery. [misty momery?]
That Afternoon,we,six girls,took many photoes, and had a good time. I was so tired,but,it's it was still a funny day.
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