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May,4,2013 It's supposed to be a noemal day today,i got up at 7 a.m,and my classes began at eight.It seems everything goes as usual. But something happened.My best friend broke up with her boyfriend,I think she's down,which upset me.So it became a hard day today.

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May,4,2013

It's supposed to be a normal day today.  I got up at 7 a.m, and my classes began at eight. It seems everything was going as usual.
However, something happened. My best friend broke up with her boyfriend.  I think she's down, which upset me, so it became a hard day today.

 

[Good job.  Remember that 'but' and 'so' are used mostly as conjunctions, to connect two clauses together.]

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