marvel's notebook entry: Oct 17, 2010
Today is more beautiful , because my sister born new baby , My family happy and go to visit her in hospitle , My mother when saw my sister began to cry ,and hug her long time and asked my sister are you ok ? my sister crying again but in the end eveybody at the room start laughing about this attitud.
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marvel's notebook entry: Oct 17, 2010
Today is more beautiful , because my sister born new baby( has delevered or put a new baby) , My family happy( was happy) and go( went) to visit her in hospitle , My mother when saw my sister began to cry ,and hug her long time and asked my sister are you ok ? my sister crying again ( began to cry again ) but in the end eveybody at the room start laughing about this attitud.good entry , you r awesome . and good luck :)
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