My trip to Yangjiang

This is the second time I have traveled while going to my college. Compared with the first trip to Zhuhai Silvery Beach, Yangjiang is much more beautiful and cleaner. Obviously, I enjoyed the time there. I went for a trip along with all my classmates go for a trip. We went to three places of intrest---first Dajiaowan, second Shiliyintan, and last Mawei Island. When we reached the first place , we were attracted by the extensive, clean sea and the boundless blue sky. I couldn't wait to play in the water. I felt so happy and close to the nature. It seemed that I was in the hug of my mother---so peaceful in my heart. Then we went to Shiliyintan, which is famous for its ancient ship dating back to Song Dynasty. At first sight of it, I felt the prosperity at that time, producing china and silk and transporting them abroad. Although the ship was refloated after many years,it still keeps its shape and the design. From the wall, I saw the beautiful, detailed patterns, which brought me to Song Dynasty, and made me feel a sense of pride and China's charm. What impressed me most is a pair of eyes on the front of the ship ,making my impression of our ansestors and history more myterious and attractive. The last place was Mawei Island. Why do we call it like this name? Because the island is famous for its shape, which looks like a long and curving tail when standing on the mountain. How romantic! Though I was kind of tired after the trip, I still feel it is worthwhile for you to relax yourself and adjust yourself after the noisy and busy life and work. Yangjiang, I hope I can travel again next time with my family. A heaven of peaceful heart. Maybe there are some mistakes in it.Hope you can point out them. Thanks. I like English.

[Very good work and quite interesting.  Just remember to put a space after all periods and commas, not before them.]