About Cats

I have been looking for cat adoption to adopt a cat since my beloved cat passed away at the beginning of this year. He was a Scottish Fold cat with a beautiful cream colour, he had fluffy paws and big glittery yellow eyes. I wanted to find a cat which is also a [another] Scottish Fold cat, but It it's hard to find this type of cat in reality; they are too precious. I have read a meaningful sentence wrote written by Jean Cocteau, "I love cats because I enjoy my home; and little by little, they become its visible soul.", that's totally how I feel!

A few days ago, I am was surfing a forum and I found a post which was seeking an adopter for a grey colour coloured Scottish Fold cat. I asked my boyfriend to contacted contact the owner immediately. The owner told us that the reason why he was giving away his cats, is because that his little child was always plucked plucking their hair, disturbed them a lot and a new baby is was coming right away. It's difficult for him to look after both sides, cats and family.

Me and my boyfriend both love cats, therefore we decided to adopt another one, namely a British Shorthair cats cat, a/the (depending on wether the Scottish Fold cat has only one sister or more) sister of that Scottish Fold cat. I think they will be more comfortable if they are being kept together. The owner is pleased that we are able to adopt two cats at the same time.

We went to pick them up today and they are still fear afraid of strangers, It it's important for them taking to take their time to adapt to a new environment andnew owners. So Therefore, I will be patient and love them as much as I can.

wrong

correction

correct but rusty [suggested alternative]

About Cats

I have been looking for cat adoption since my beloved cat passed away at the beginning of this year.He was a Scottish Fold cat with beautiful cream colour, he had fluffy paws and big glittery yellow eyes.I wanted to find a cat which is also a Scottish Fold cat, but It's hard to find adoption for this type of cat in reality, they are too precious. I have read a meaningful sentence wrote by Jean Cocteau, "I love cats because I enjoy my home; and little by little, they become its visible soul.", that's totally how I feel!

Few days ago, I am was surfing the forum and I found a post which was seeking adopter for  looking for somebody to adopt someone a grey colour Scottish Fold cat. I asked my boyfriend to contacted the owner immediately.The owner told us the reason why he was giving his cats away. It was because his little child was always plucking their hair, disturbed them a lot and a new baby was on it's way.  It's difficult for him to look after both the cats, and the family.

Me and my boyfriend both love cats, we decided to adopt another British Shorthair cats which is the sister of that Scottish Fold cat. I think they will be more comfortable if they are being kept together.The owner is pleased that we are able to adopt two cats at the same time.

We went to pick them up today and they are still affraid of strangers, It's important for them taking to give them some time to adapt to their new environment and new owners . So, I will be patient and love them as much as I can.

你写英语写的很厉害！继续努力吧！