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My movie time
Recently I have been watching US TV Series "Revenge". I never knew only such a strong revenge could also make up a long story.
Emily is brave and self-restrained to some extent. She loves her daddy very much, after she discovers the truth of her daddy's death reason. She throws herself into a war with Granson and the only happiness and the hope for her is to destroy the person who didn't help her dad or trap him.
Nolan is a computer freak - she could do anything by computer for any reason. He doesn't care about fame and wealth. He is rich and full of talent. Without his effort and great support behind her, Emily might fail or expose her identity easily.
Danial is handsome and crazy about Emily. He knows nothing of what his parents had done and life seems so easy for him. He is the king son for that son. However, after he knowing the sin, he has to be mature and protect his family, even if it is not by the proper way. Anyway, he is a good guy, his smile is charming and eyes so tenter. I like his action very much.
I will follow the movie and don't know whether other people comment about this film.
Help me correct this article and I'll appreciate a lot.
[Good work and a good description of the series. As a general rule, if you put more that one 'and' in a sentence, you should make a separate sentence.]
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