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I will not forget this day !    

I will not forget this day ! Today I had an exam in the morning and I was studying all night. I was prepared for the exam. Writing this name always causes me to benervous and worried. I do not know why, especially during exam time. I prepared for writing about the best restaurant and I was excited, but the big problem was that the question of the exam was about worst restaurant! I was confused and worried and I could not write because I did not expect it! Time is up , and I just write wrote simple and unclear sentences. and unclear I am sad and still have the problem of writing. I wish I could write any subject without concern, but I do not know how .... :(



Can you give me advice ?

I will not forget this day !

I will not forget this day ! today I had exam in the morning and I was studying all night , I was prepared for exam especially writing this name always causes me nervous and worried I do not know why, especially exam time.I Prepared for the best restaurant and I was excited, but the big problem the question of exam was about worst restaurant! I Confused and worried and I could not write because I did not expect it!, time is up ,I just write simple sentences and unclear I am sad and still the problem of writing ..I wish write any subject without worried, but I do not know .... :(



can you give me advice ?