Should parents send their kid to art classes

Many parents perfer prefer to send their kids to art classes, because they think which can want to enrich their kids' knowledge and broaden their kids' horizons. ,So the Parents ask their children to attend various art classes, because they firmly believe that attending art classes is vital to their kids' furture.
On the other hand, the parents don't turely truly know what their kids want to do, driving the kids to attend art classes, and that which take up most of the kids' spare time. Therefore, kids have no don't have enough time to do what they are instersted interested in .and the parents give kids exact a burden.
The parent Parents should give kids an opportunity if the kids show interesting in what they want to learn. (I would suggest you write this instead as, "Parents should give kids the opportunity to learn what they are interested in."

Hi, Naruto. Please study how to use the commas and periods. I agree with your viewpoint! Good job and interesting notebook entry. :)