Bonjour...

Bonjour, 
Je suis une jeune fille femme de 19 ans, mon nom est Ulil.
I would like to learn French, but I don't know...
Just a lil' bit busy on at college.
I don't have much time to improve my French and no one nobody who helps me to talk regularly,
because practice by talking regularly is the best way to learn a foreign language. 
And for now, I'm focusing to on improving my English. 
But for everyone who is fluent in French or French is your first language,
I really hope that you could/can correct my article. 

Thanks for your advice.

me :)

bonjour . .

bonjour
Je suis une femme, mon nom est ulil (fille se dit en gros jusqu'à l'adolescence...)
I would like to learn french, but I don't know
just lil bit busy on college
don't have much time to improving my french and no one who help me to talk regularly
because practice by talking regularly is the best way to learn foreign language
and for now I'm focusing to improving my english
but for everyone, who fluent on french or french is your first language
I really hope, that you could correct my article,,

thanks for your advice

me :)

Allez, il faut essayer un peu plus....

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