My first Notebook : Me

hi, I'm David and I'm started learning English recently. I would like to speak it quickly but I know that is impossible if I'm alone. I'm so happy to have find Italki. I can help you in ma native language (French) and correct your notebook, and I can writing a message here. Thanks to help me. See you soon. Bye

Mostly a very good job, David.  Just a few more points.

*I have recently started learning English.

*I would like to speak it fluently.

*I am so happy to have found Italki.

My first Notebook : Me

Hi, I'm David and I've started learning English recently. I would like to speak it quickly, but I know that is impossible if I'm alone. I'm so happy to have find Italki. I can help you in my native language (French), and correct your notebook, and I can write a message here. Thanks for helping me. See you soon. Bye.

[Good start.]