please correct my email to my manager

Dear Dr.Mohamed
 

I stayed at Riyadh during last period till now for training and i'll travel to skaka next sunday where i'll be resident and I already received my house loan so now can I continue to stay in hotel till my flight to my area

Thank you

Dear Dr.Saed Shaker (“Dear” is unnecessary for a business type of an email. If his first name is Saed, it is also unnecessary unless you are on more familiar terms, then you can say “Dr. Saed,” instead of “Dr. Shaker,”)

I stayed at Riyadh (if Riyadh is a military base or something you can say it like this, if it is a city say “I stayed in Riyadh”) during last period till (until) now for training and I'll travel to Skaka next Sunday where I'll be resident (residing/living). and I already received my house loan so now can I continue to stay in (a) hotel till (until) my flight to my area (“to my area” is already implied since you said you were traveling to Skaka to be a resident)

Dr. Shaker,

Last period I was at Riyadh for training. I’ll be traveling to Skaka next Sunday where I’ll be residing. (living?) I have already received my house loan so I can continue to stay in a hotel until my flight.