Picking Strawberries

My family went to visit a strawberry base on Sunday in Beijing Changping province. It is a very big place. There were many greenhouses wherewith strawberries were planted in the pots.

My son picked some strawberries, but they were so expensive, that it costed 100 CNY per kg. After all, my son was very happy to pick those strawberries and that's good enough for me. My son was happy, and I was happy too.

We also visited a showroom, and the showroom which included 5 exhibition rooms. I remembered one was called tomato maze. Big fences stood up there vertically and lots of tomatoes covered them fences. It was looked like many The walls looked green. The tomatoes were also not ripe, they were still green.

Comments:

When you tell a story make sure that you are writing in the past tense. The correct form for the simple past of stand is “stood".

Watch for spelling also.

There were also some stylistic errors, maybe because you are afraid to be more adventurous in your writing, try and be more descriptive!