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Do you drink? I am not good at drink. So I don't drinking outside alone . Sometime had a litte drink with my friends. But I dont know why I really want have a drink after walking tonight. So I am going to a music bar and get a bottle of beer. Just enjoy drinking alone and watching football on TV. Someone offer me a drink, but I dont mind. Just a bottle to me is better. I feeling myself have slightly tipsy when I finish one. My cheeks burned. But I am feeling very good. The bar is near my home. My foot as if treading on air when I walking home. Like something goes.

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Do you drink?

I am not good at drinking, So I don't drinking outside alone . Sometime had I have a little drink with my friends. However I dont know why I really want to have a drink after walking tonight. So I am going to a music bar and get a bottle of beer. I just enjoy drinking alone and watching football on TV. Someone offer me a drink, but I dont mind. Just a bottle to me is better. I feeling myself have slightly tipsy when I finish one. My cheeks burned, but I am feeling very good. The bar is near my home. My foot feet feels as if I'm treading on air when I walking home. Like something goes.

 

(for last sentence you can say life goes on)

(also i am a little confused about the tense. you say you are going to a bar, but then the sentences afterward say that those things have already happened.) still i generally understand what you're saying. 我也通常自己不去酒吧。

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