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The Walk
The forest was light and beautiful with a crimson sky upon it. All the trees had green leaves and the flowers were blooming. Many birds were there and I heard them all twitting.
I felt really relaxed and safe. Behind a small hill I found a two story light house that seemed looked like a chalet, all built in wood, with a white fence around and full of colored
flowers upon a perfectly cut lawn grass. I went inside with the aim to satisfy my curiosity. A big room was downstairs with a big kitchen and a round dining table in the
center of the room. On my left side, a nice fireplace was burning, his wood keeping the house warm. A small wooden staircase I went led me to the second floor where
I suddenly noticed a big red sofa to my left and a blue one to my right. Nothing else was there, no bed, no chairs, no tables. Strange! I thought; where did the owner sleep
during the night? I left the nice house thinking about the invisible owner that was living there. After ten minutes of walking, I heard what sounded like a similar to snore. I went
near the place from where the noise came from and I saw a big brown bear who was sleeping on a big green bed; the missing bed of the house! “Hey Mr. Bear, do you know
where the owner of the house is?” I saked. The bear awoke and, with an angry voice, replied: “I ate him and now I want to sleep”. “And why did you eat him?”. I asked.
“Because I didn't want to sleep anymore on the ground and I needed a comfortable bed. He didn't want to give it to me! ”Mr. Bear said. “Now I know, you are right Mr. Bear,
the ground is harder and colder than a comfortable bed. Have sweet dreams my friend.” And I carried on walking on my way. I walked up to until I arrived in front of a fence.
It was rusty and broken. (Inside it an abandoned garden with wild plantswas waiting a gardener or someone who wants to put order. No one went and no one will go to put order, I didn’t
know why but it was so.these 2 sentenses are confusing, what are you trying to say?) I quickly left the abandoned garden with a bad feeling inside my heart. Luckyly, I noticed
a long and tall wall with a ladder leaning up against it. I am curious you know, so I went up the ladder and the higher I climbed more I saw a bright light shining from the
other side of the wall. When I was on the top I saw a sparkling light was flashing in my eyes. It was the sun shining on my face. I awoke and took a look around me. I had fallen
asleep on a lawn. What a strange dream, "it’s time to go home" I thought, and I started to go for a walk in the forest, a light and beautiful forest.
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